As the places
We roamed
Make me realize
Your absence,
I enjoy it still.
As the skies
We stared
Cover me alone,
Without you,
I enjoy it still.
I enjoy it, the thought,
You are being thought.
I enjoy it, the feeling,
You are being felt.
I enjoy it, the breathe,
You are being breathed.
I enjoy it still, cause,
I’m being watched,
From the heavens you live,
I’m being felt,
By my heart you own.
Whatever I do
Without you,
Though all alone,
I will enjoy it,
For us, for you.
PS: Just fiction work…
We roamed
Make me realize
Your absence,
I enjoy it still.
As the skies
We stared
Cover me alone,
Without you,
I enjoy it still.
I enjoy it, the thought,
You are being thought.
I enjoy it, the feeling,
You are being felt.
I enjoy it, the breathe,
You are being breathed.
I enjoy it still, cause,I’m being watched,
From the heavens you live,
I’m being felt,
By my heart you own.
Whatever I do
Without you,
Though all alone,
I will enjoy it,
For us, for you.
PS: Just fiction work…
30 comments:
nice one still! :)
Its wonderful (fictionwork :-)
Love it ....
Have a fantastic sunday
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Kareltje =^.^= Betsie >^.^<
fiction or not, I love it. :)
Nice work.
Beautiful lines...
Thanks
Beautiful and touching.Well done
Pramoda
enjoyed it! loved it! :)
love was the only thing in between us.. wonderful poem :)
Weakest LINK
thats a beautiful work....
Even after missing many of ur posts..
I enjoy it still :P
Well jokes apart
a lovely read and beautifully written.
Imagery was superb.
nice verses.. melancholy also has to be rejoiced..absence still kindles passions..Isn't that a nice feeling?
He's being remembered, and is missed, with a smile on the face.
Lovely!
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Very nice prams!
Love Di ♥
Pramoda,
Fiction, but still it's worth a million times in dreams for that someone!
Hank
Thanks Pria
Hi Anya.. wow.. nice to see u back after so long..
thanks ya..
Thanks Zeba.. welcome here..
Hi Shukoor.. thank you..
Thanks Partha uncle..
Hi pranab, thanks :)
Hi Rachit.. thanks..
Thank you deeps..;)
Hi Jyothi.. thank you so much ya :)
Keep coming here..;)
Really nice one aditya..
@ hi BA..
Yeah, :) thanks fr recognizing it.;)
Thanks Di..
@ Kaykula..
wow.. nice ..;) Thanks so much..!!
This evokes memories of my parents who are gone now...I can enjoy things I used to do with them and the memories make me feel they are with me.
Hi Susie..
that's nice.. memories of parents always bring joy to heart..
Have a good day..
awwwwwwww..... i liked it a lot.. i recently lost a very dear friend of mine, this one just brought back memories....
@ Menachery..
hi, welcome here..
That's sad about ur frnd.. memories remain forever..
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