He was a cool guy with a soft attitude. She was a dynamic young lady with full of spirits. She desperately wanted to talk to him before he would leave the city. He had come to the city to express his love towards her, but he could not do it till the last day, as they had been from two different teams who spent the difficult time being opponents, as almost enemies. Now she called him there to express a very important feeling of her life.
He: Did you want to talk to me?
She: Yeah…
He: (Took a moment…) Yeah, tell me.
She: (Still silent and was staring at her legs)
He: Excuse me, can we talk now?
She: Yes, sure.
He: (Eagerly waiting to hear from her)
She: Could you please excuse me if you don’t like my opinion?
He: (Took a deep breath) Yeah, ok.
She: (Preparing her heart to speak out…)
He: (With a cool voice) See, I need to rush now, could you please…
She: (Before he ended his lines) Will you marry me?
A minute of silence…
He: Do you really mean it?
She: Yes, I mean it.
He: (Happy at his heart) What do you know about me?
She: I love you.
He: But what do you know about me?
She: (Silent…)
He: Did we talk to each other earlier?
She: No
He: Did I ever behave nicely with you?
She: No
He: Then how could you ask that?
She: I love you for what you are.
He: Means?
She: I would have never loved you, had you changed yourself nicely for me.
He: (Impressed…)
She: I would have never expressed my feelings, if I was not sure that you love me.
He: (?) So, you are sure that I love you?
She: I know you.
A minute of silence…
He: (Still silent)
She: Please forgive me if I did hurt your feelings.
He moved close to her so that he could catch her breath, could hear her heartbeat, and could feel her melting in his arms. They were all alone there having their heartbeats locked with each other’s.
He: Did you want to talk to me?
She: Yeah…
He: (Took a moment…) Yeah, tell me.
She: (Still silent and was staring at her legs)
He: Excuse me, can we talk now?
She: Yes, sure.
He: (Eagerly waiting to hear from her)
She: Could you please excuse me if you don’t like my opinion?
He: (Took a deep breath) Yeah, ok.
She: (Preparing her heart to speak out…)
He: (With a cool voice) See, I need to rush now, could you please…
She: (Before he ended his lines) Will you marry me?
A minute of silence…
He: Do you really mean it?
She: Yes, I mean it.
He: (Happy at his heart) What do you know about me?
She: I love you.
He: But what do you know about me?
She: (Silent…)
He: Did we talk to each other earlier?
She: No
He: Did I ever behave nicely with you?
She: No
He: Then how could you ask that?
She: I love you for what you are.
He: Means?
She: I would have never loved you, had you changed yourself nicely for me.
He: (Impressed…)
She: I would have never expressed my feelings, if I was not sure that you love me.
He: (?) So, you are sure that I love you?
She: I know you.
A minute of silence…
He: (Still silent)
She: Please forgive me if I did hurt your feelings.
He moved close to her so that he could catch her breath, could hear her heartbeat, and could feel her melting in his arms. They were all alone there having their heartbeats locked with each other’s.
He: Do I deserve you?She: Never ask me that.
He: Answer me…
She: We both have got more than what we deserve.
74 comments:
Very impressed with this, good to read.
Yvonne.
so sweet..luvly post of luv..:)
Hi Prams,
This is the comment for your previous post. I think I am the one among who has given comments to your earlier posts. Thank you so much for replying to my earlier posts. Still there are lot of posts where I need to comment. will do soon the same.
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Prasad
Hi Prams...
No words to say, because it is a LOVE. I loved it...
And a lovey post, deserving towards each other.
Hey... Pic is very nice.
Hot pic with sweet romantic moments on a rainy day.
hmmm I need to wait for the moment WHO deserves ME... heheheh
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Prasad
Hi Prams
Its a very romantic post today
I love it !!!!
I am a romantic person ..... ;)
greetings
Anya :)
This is a very romantic post indeed.
:)
nice!!
the last lines sums it up all ...liked the way you hang it up ...
prams that was awesome...
there again, and it's about love. everyone and anyone can write a very good topic about love...:)
i thought this was submitted for sunday scribblings, sort of like an interview, this week's prompt there!
hugs dear for a somewhat melodramatic post!
:)
Lovely lovely love
For Love is about embracing the imperfections and looking beyond them! Nice read Prams!
swet :)) loved it..
nice love story.. :)
too good, sweet...Some times it is must to speak out ur emotions :)
Woww :) :) So Beautiful Post Dear :) :)
oh boi....lovely read...:)
Pramoda,
Read 9 pending posts yesterday and this one today. Could not post comments yesterday as your previous post seems to be comment disabled. Now here I go -
1. On that Sunday : Google had nice time with you. Obama, I think it was little too early. You forgot fielding in cricket. Good for attitude change but for better only.
2. Nice composition, Memories.
3. Celebrity - I would choose male version of Mother Terresa or Baba Amte.
4. See the movie and forget what you thought you learnt?
5. True, we should let children choose their own goals and encourage them to strive for it.
6. Again true statement on Irony.
7. Sachin must read this.
8. One must dream big but aim what can be achieved within or little more than his or her capabilities.
9. Match result was forgone conclussion the moment one saw our score. No miracle were expected from our lads.
10. This one, fiction based on facts, isn't it? LOL
Take care
Hi! Pramoda,
Wow! that was a really different and lovely post from you,uve presented it to give the reader a visual effect...thanks
"Heartbeats locked" - thats a new phrase for me...wonderful too :)
Tht shows tht she was you :) :)
Nice one pramoda..loved it :)
oops .. that post was actually for someone else ...
i have nothing to do in it whatsoever ... :-P
ooh wow... this is such a nice and different story...ossum!!!
simply wonderful dear..
I liked the way u expressed the way both of them specially the gal knew tat he too loved her..
yeah..love is simply an amazing feeling..it does not always happen to people we admire..it infact happens to those we initially dun even like to see..
:):)
Dear Prams,
Good Evening!
At last,a romantic post from you.:)I too published one on love.
but personally,i would love the boy to express the feelings and propose!:)
i enjoyed the photo,of the lovers lost and locked in deep love.:)
wishing a cool n lovely night,
sasneham,
Anu
If this one is complete fiction then Wow .... its really nice but if based on true events then the Boy and Girl are very lucky I must say ....
Followed a trial of links and landed here, and am I happy I did! Beautiful dialogue. Simple, subtle and romantic. Cheers.
Hi!
Could relate very well to your words,beautifully written,thanks i think u can try your hand in writing plays
hmm :) he wanted to express his love... but she expressed hers for him b4 he could.
they wanted to be with each other and they got what they wanted. :)
they did indeed deserve each other i think. lovely post Prams!
hi yvonne..thank you...
hi madhu..
thank yuu soo much ...
Hi Prasad,
its a real pleasure to have comment on my write ups..Thank you ...:)
and next time, plz inform me t which posts u have commenetd .. eheheh ..ok naa...LoL
hi prasad,
thank you.thank you..
:) All the best to u toooo...:)
hi anya ..thanks alott..
swapna,
thanks yaar..
hi ekam .thank youu
hi tanmaya,
thank youuu
hi deeps,
:) So nice of you..:)
hi suresh,
thank youuu..
hi amity,
yeah..everyone's feelings abt love are special..:)
Thanks yaar
hi poornima,
thank youu soo much and welcome here..
hi Raksha
Thank youuu
hi chaco lover...thank you gal...
hi Riya
true...:) Thanks
hi sahana,
thanks mam...
hi Divsi,
thank youuu
hi uncle,
so nice of you to have read and comented abt all those ones..:) I enjoy ur replies...
Male version of mother theressa is much awaited..:) And yaa our players have only one chance tomorrow to play their hearts..
and jack uncle,
haa sachin must read this....but saching reading my blog .. hehe .. i dream of it..
hi RD .. thank youu soo much .. am very happy at ur commnt..:)
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hey Anu..Kya hua??
@ Anonymous..
hhehehe..not me ... :)
Hi Suma, Thank you dear ...
hey deeps..whats going on re?
hi sid,
thank you..enjoy the days at home..
Hi ANu,
Thanks for coming again..
:) The bou culd have done it..but yaa she took the chace..:) either way is ok,right?
:) Thanks Anu..
Hi Priya,
True punch !!
Thank you gal ..
hi dhamanji..
yaa they are lucky ..:) Thank youu
Hai Prabhu,
Welcome here..Thank you soo much and am too happy that u r stopped by my space.:)
Plz kep coming ..:)
@ Cool Drizzle
hey wow..welcome here ..
that was a grt sugession for me . :) But i need more practice..this is my frst of its kind post..
Hi Vinay,
they they deserved each other...thank youuuuu
Touch Wood! How good :D wish everyone was like this :)
hi TS
well yaar..thank u..")
So sweet! Seriously :D
hi Dhanya..
Thank yuu...
impossible.. happens only in stories.. even after years we discover that we dunno so much abt the people we love..
good read though.. :) stories like these spoils us.. expectin real life to be as ostensibly romantic!
Hi Abdul..welcome here..:)
Tortoise and rabbit never kept any race..but we learn from that story so much .. in fact that would be the first story probably, that every child learns..
stories let us know the possibilities. it is up to us how we face them in real life..
Thank you soo much for letting me think on this..:) plz Do visit my blog often..
well said.. though i still don agree wit u.. :)
Hi Abdul,
its so nice to see u coming back to this page and reading me..Thank You..
Well, its ok if we cant agree to each other..Both are correct ... hehe..enjoy ur weekend..
do u want to post just some englìśh?
@ Anonymous
Well, Not really.. :)
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