Sep 24, 2011

I Enjoy It Still…

As the places
We roamed
Make me realize
Your absence,
I enjoy it still.

As the skies
We stared
Cover me alone,
Without you,
I enjoy it still.

I enjoy it, the thought,
You are being thought.

I enjoy it, the feeling,
You are being felt.

I enjoy it, the breathe,
You are being breathed.
I enjoy it still, cause,
I’m being watched,
From the heavens you live,
I’m being felt,
By my heart you own.

Whatever I do
Without you,
Though all alone,
I will enjoy it,
For us, for you.

PS: Just fiction work…

30 comments:

  1. Priya ChilamkurthiSeptember 25, 2011 at 12:53 AM

    nice one still! :)

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  2. AnyaSeptember 25, 2011 at 1:20 AM

    Its wonderful (fictionwork :-)
    Love it ....


    Have a fantastic sunday
    hugs
    Kareltje =^.^= Betsie >^.^<

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  3. ZebaSeptember 25, 2011 at 1:47 AM

    fiction or not, I love it. :)

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  4. TPShukooRSeptember 25, 2011 at 2:00 AM

    Nice work.
    Beautiful lines...
    Thanks

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  5. KParthasarathiSeptember 25, 2011 at 5:20 AM

    Beautiful and touching.Well done
    Pramoda

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  6. PranabSeptember 25, 2011 at 7:54 AM

    enjoyed it! loved it! :)

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  7. RachitSeptember 25, 2011 at 3:13 PM

    love was the only thing in between us.. wonderful poem :)

    Weakest LINK

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  8. deepsSeptember 25, 2011 at 4:14 PM

    thats a beautiful work....

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  9. Jyoti MishraSeptember 25, 2011 at 7:32 PM

    Even after missing many of ur posts..
    I enjoy it still :P

    Well jokes apart
    a lovely read and beautifully written.
    Imagery was superb.

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  10. adithyasaravanaSeptember 25, 2011 at 8:30 PM

    nice verses.. melancholy also has to be rejoiced..absence still kindles passions..Isn't that a nice feeling?

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  11. Blasphemous AestheteSeptember 25, 2011 at 8:51 PM

    He's being remembered, and is missed, with a smile on the face.

    Lovely!


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  12. DianaSeptember 25, 2011 at 10:45 PM

    Very nice prams!
    Love Di ♥

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  13. kaykualaSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:00 PM

    Pramoda,
    Fiction, but still it's worth a million times in dreams for that someone!

    Hank

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  14. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    Thanks Pria

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  15. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    Hi Anya.. wow.. nice to see u back after so long..

    thanks ya..

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  16. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    Thanks Zeba.. welcome here..

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  17. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    Hi Shukoor.. thank you..

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  18. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    Thanks Partha uncle..

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  19. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    Hi pranab, thanks :)

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  20. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:14 PM

    Hi Rachit.. thanks..

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  21. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:15 PM

    Thank you deeps..;)

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  22. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:15 PM

    Hi Jyothi.. thank you so much ya :)

    Keep coming here..;)

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  23. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:15 PM

    Really nice one aditya..

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  24. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:16 PM

    @ hi BA..

    Yeah, :) thanks fr recognizing it.;)

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  25. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:16 PM

    Thanks Di..

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  26. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:17 PM

    @ Kaykula..

    wow.. nice ..;) Thanks so much..!!

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  27. Susie ClevengerSeptember 26, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    This evokes memories of my parents who are gone now...I can enjoy things I used to do with them and the memories make me feel they are with me.

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  28. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 26, 2011 at 6:18 AM

    Hi Susie..

    that's nice.. memories of parents always bring joy to heart..

    Have a good day..

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  29. MenacherySeptember 26, 2011 at 11:58 AM

    awwwwwwww..... i liked it a lot.. i recently lost a very dear friend of mine, this one just brought back memories....

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  30. Pramoda MeduriSeptember 26, 2011 at 9:25 PM

    @ Menachery..

    hi, welcome here..

    That's sad about ur frnd.. memories remain forever..

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