Nov 8, 2009

Love Endures...

He was a cool guy with a soft attitude. She was a dynamic young lady with full of spirits. She desperately wanted to talk to him before he would leave the city. He had come to the city to express his love towards her, but he could not do it till the last day, as they had been from two different teams who spent the difficult time being opponents, as almost enemies. Now she called him there to express a very important feeling of her life.

He: Did you want to talk to me?
She: Yeah…

He: (Took a moment…) Yeah, tell me.
She: (Still silent and was staring at her legs)

He: Excuse me, can we talk now?
She: Yes, sure.

He: (Eagerly waiting to hear from her)
She: Could you please excuse me if you don’t like my opinion?

He: (Took a deep breath) Yeah, ok.
She: (Preparing her heart to speak out…)

He: (With a cool voice) See, I need to rush now, could you please…
She: (Before he ended his lines) Will you marry me?

A minute of silence…

He: Do you really mean it?
She: Yes, I mean it.

He: (Happy at his heart) What do you know about me?
She: I love you.

He: But what do you know about me?
She: (Silent…)

He: Did we talk to each other earlier?
She: No

He: Did I ever behave nicely with you?
She: No

He: Then how could you ask that?
She: I love you for what you are.

He: Means?
She: I would have never loved you, had you changed yourself nicely for me.

He: (Impressed…)
She: I would have never expressed my feelings, if I was not sure that you love me.

He: (?) So, you are sure that I love you?
She: I know you.

A minute of silence…

He: (Still silent)
She: Please forgive me if I did hurt your feelings.

He moved close to her so that he could catch her breath, could hear her heartbeat, and could feel her melting in his arms. They were all alone there having their heartbeats locked with each other’s.
He: Do I deserve you?
She: Never ask me that.

He: Answer me…
She: We both have got more than what we deserve.

74 comments:

  1. RHYTHM AND RHYMENovember 8, 2009 at 10:46 PM

    Very impressed with this, good to read.

    Yvonne.

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  2. Mads...November 9, 2009 at 1:51 AM

    so sweet..luvly post of luv..:)

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  3. Prasad GuttiNovember 9, 2009 at 1:56 AM

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  4. Prasad GuttiNovember 9, 2009 at 2:00 AM

    Hi Prams,

    This is the comment for your previous post. I think I am the one among who has given comments to your earlier posts. Thank you so much for replying to my earlier posts. Still there are lot of posts where I need to comment. will do soon the same.

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    Prasad

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  5. Prasad GuttiNovember 9, 2009 at 2:02 AM

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  6. Prasad GuttiNovember 9, 2009 at 2:03 AM

    Hi Prams...

    No words to say, because it is a LOVE. I loved it...
    And a lovey post, deserving towards each other.

    Hey... Pic is very nice.

    Hot pic with sweet romantic moments on a rainy day.

    hmmm I need to wait for the moment WHO deserves ME... heheheh

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    Prasad

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  7. AnyaNovember 9, 2009 at 3:01 AM

    Hi Prams
    Its a very romantic post today
    I love it !!!!
    I am a romantic person ..... ;)
    greetings
    Anya :)

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  8. Swapna Raghu SanandNovember 9, 2009 at 10:32 AM

    This is a very romantic post indeed.

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  9. EkamNovember 9, 2009 at 10:48 AM

    :)

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  10. UnknownNovember 9, 2009 at 11:40 AM

    nice!!

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  11. deepsNovember 9, 2009 at 12:29 PM

    the last lines sums it up all ...liked the way you hang it up ...

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  12. SureeNovember 9, 2009 at 1:12 PM

    prams that was awesome...

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  13. AmityNovember 9, 2009 at 1:33 PM

    there again, and it's about love. everyone and anyone can write a very good topic about love...:)

    i thought this was submitted for sunday scribblings, sort of like an interview, this week's prompt there!

    hugs dear for a somewhat melodramatic post!

    :)

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  14. PoornimaNovember 9, 2009 at 3:10 PM

    Lovely lovely love

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  15. RocksaNovember 9, 2009 at 3:17 PM

    For Love is about embracing the imperfections and looking beyond them! Nice read Prams!

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  16. ShritiNovember 9, 2009 at 3:54 PM

    swet :)) loved it..
    nice love story.. :)

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  17. Ordinary GalNovember 9, 2009 at 4:20 PM

    too good, sweet...Some times it is must to speak out ur emotions :)

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  18. CreativityNovember 9, 2009 at 5:33 PM

    Woww :) :) So Beautiful Post Dear :) :)

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  19. divsiNovember 9, 2009 at 6:05 PM

    oh boi....lovely read...:)

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  20. JackNovember 9, 2009 at 7:38 PM

    Pramoda,

    Read 9 pending posts yesterday and this one today. Could not post comments yesterday as your previous post seems to be comment disabled. Now here I go -

    1. On that Sunday : Google had nice time with you. Obama, I think it was little too early. You forgot fielding in cricket. Good for attitude change but for better only.

    2. Nice composition, Memories.

    3. Celebrity - I would choose male version of Mother Terresa or Baba Amte.

    4. See the movie and forget what you thought you learnt?

    5. True, we should let children choose their own goals and encourage them to strive for it.

    6. Again true statement on Irony.

    7. Sachin must read this.

    8. One must dream big but aim what can be achieved within or little more than his or her capabilities.

    9. Match result was forgone conclussion the moment one saw our score. No miracle were expected from our lads.

    10. This one, fiction based on facts, isn't it? LOL

    Take care

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  21. Readers DaisNovember 9, 2009 at 8:49 PM

    Hi! Pramoda,

    Wow! that was a really different and lovely post from you,uve presented it to give the reader a visual effect...thanks
    "Heartbeats locked" - thats a new phrase for me...wonderful too :)

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  22. anupamaNovember 9, 2009 at 9:32 PM

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  23. AnonymousNovember 9, 2009 at 9:42 PM

    Tht shows tht she was you :) :)

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  24. Snow WhiteNovember 10, 2009 at 8:51 AM

    Nice one pramoda..loved it :)

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  25. deepsNovember 10, 2009 at 10:04 AM

    oops .. that post was actually for someone else ...
    i have nothing to do in it whatsoever ... :-P

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  26. Siddhesh KabeNovember 10, 2009 at 11:14 AM

    ooh wow... this is such a nice and different story...ossum!!!

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  27. Priya JoyceNovember 10, 2009 at 3:12 PM

    simply wonderful dear..
    I liked the way u expressed the way both of them specially the gal knew tat he too loved her..

    yeah..love is simply an amazing feeling..it does not always happen to people we admire..it infact happens to those we initially dun even like to see..

    :):)

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  28. anupamaNovember 10, 2009 at 5:10 PM

    Dear Prams,
    Good Evening!
    At last,a romantic post from you.:)I too published one on love.
    but personally,i would love the boy to express the feelings and propose!:)
    i enjoyed the photo,of the lovers lost and locked in deep love.:)
    wishing a cool n lovely night,
    sasneham,
    Anu

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  29. DhimanNovember 10, 2009 at 5:34 PM

    If this one is complete fiction then Wow .... its really nice but if based on true events then the Boy and Girl are very lucky I must say ....

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  30. itsyvitsyNovember 10, 2009 at 6:06 PM

    Followed a trial of links and landed here, and am I happy I did! Beautiful dialogue. Simple, subtle and romantic. Cheers.

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  31. cool drizzleNovember 10, 2009 at 10:10 PM

    Hi!
    Could relate very well to your words,beautifully written,thanks i think u can try your hand in writing plays

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  32. AnonymousNovember 10, 2009 at 10:48 PM

    hmm :) he wanted to express his love... but she expressed hers for him b4 he could.
    they wanted to be with each other and they got what they wanted. :)
    they did indeed deserve each other i think. lovely post Prams!

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  33. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:28 PM

    hi yvonne..thank you...

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  34. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:28 PM

    hi madhu..

    thank yuu soo much ...

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  35. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:29 PM

    Hi Prasad,

    its a real pleasure to have comment on my write ups..Thank you ...:)

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  36. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:29 PM

    and next time, plz inform me t which posts u have commenetd .. eheheh ..ok naa...LoL

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  37. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:30 PM

    hi prasad,

    thank you.thank you..

    :) All the best to u toooo...:)

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  38. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:31 PM

    hi anya ..thanks alott..

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  39. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:31 PM

    swapna,

    thanks yaar..

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  40. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:31 PM

    hi ekam .thank youu

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  41. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:32 PM

    hi tanmaya,

    thank youuu

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  42. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:32 PM

    hi deeps,

    :) So nice of you..:)

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  43. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:33 PM

    hi suresh,

    thank youuu..

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  44. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:34 PM

    hi amity,

    yeah..everyone's feelings abt love are special..:)

    Thanks yaar

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  45. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:34 PM

    hi poornima,

    thank youu soo much and welcome here..

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  46. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:34 PM

    hi Raksha

    Thank youuu

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  47. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:35 PM

    hi chaco lover...thank you gal...

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  48. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:35 PM

    hi Riya

    true...:) Thanks

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  49. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:36 PM

    hi sahana,

    thanks mam...

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  50. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:36 PM

    hi Divsi,

    thank youuu

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  51. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:38 PM

    hi uncle,

    so nice of you to have read and comented abt all those ones..:) I enjoy ur replies...

    Male version of mother theressa is much awaited..:) And yaa our players have only one chance tomorrow to play their hearts..

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  52. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:39 PM

    and jack uncle,

    haa sachin must read this....but saching reading my blog .. hehe .. i dream of it..

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  53. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:39 PM

    hi RD .. thank youu soo much .. am very happy at ur commnt..:)

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  54. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:40 PM

    @ Comment deleted ..

    hey Anu..Kya hua??

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  55. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:41 PM

    @ Anonymous..

    hhehehe..not me ... :)

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  56. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:41 PM

    Hi Suma, Thank you dear ...

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  57. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:41 PM

    hey deeps..whats going on re?

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  58. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:42 PM

    hi sid,

    thank you..enjoy the days at home..

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  59. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:43 PM

    Hi ANu,

    Thanks for coming again..

    :) The bou culd have done it..but yaa she took the chace..:) either way is ok,right?

    :) Thanks Anu..

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  60. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:43 PM

    Hi Priya,

    True punch !!

    Thank you gal ..

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  61. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:44 PM

    hi dhamanji..

    yaa they are lucky ..:) Thank youu

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  62. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:45 PM

    Hai Prabhu,

    Welcome here..Thank you soo much and am too happy that u r stopped by my space.:)

    Plz kep coming ..:)

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  63. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:46 PM

    @ Cool Drizzle

    hey wow..welcome here ..

    that was a grt sugession for me . :) But i need more practice..this is my frst of its kind post..

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  64. Pramoda MeduriNovember 10, 2009 at 11:46 PM

    Hi Vinay,

    they they deserved each other...thank youuuuu

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  65. Tranquility SpeaksNovember 11, 2009 at 1:22 AM

    Touch Wood! How good :D wish everyone was like this :)

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  66. Pramoda MeduriNovember 11, 2009 at 8:36 AM

    hi TS

    well yaar..thank u..")

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  67. DhanyaNovember 12, 2009 at 6:58 PM

    So sweet! Seriously :D

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  68. Pramoda MeduriNovember 12, 2009 at 7:33 PM

    hi Dhanya..

    Thank yuu...

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  69. RaufNovember 13, 2009 at 11:53 PM

    impossible.. happens only in stories.. even after years we discover that we dunno so much abt the people we love..

    good read though.. :) stories like these spoils us.. expectin real life to be as ostensibly romantic!

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  70. Pramoda MeduriNovember 14, 2009 at 7:08 AM

    Hi Abdul..welcome here..:)

    Tortoise and rabbit never kept any race..but we learn from that story so much .. in fact that would be the first story probably, that every child learns..

    stories let us know the possibilities. it is up to us how we face them in real life..

    Thank you soo much for letting me think on this..:) plz Do visit my blog often..

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  71. RaufNovember 15, 2009 at 12:17 AM

    well said.. though i still don agree wit u.. :)

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  72. Pramoda MeduriNovember 15, 2009 at 8:27 AM

    Hi Abdul,

    its so nice to see u coming back to this page and reading me..Thank You..

    Well, its ok if we cant agree to each other..Both are correct ... hehe..enjoy ur weekend..

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  73. AnonymousNovember 15, 2009 at 9:25 PM

    do u want to post just some englìśh?

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  74. Pramoda MeduriNovember 16, 2009 at 9:23 AM

    @ Anonymous

    Well, Not really.. :)

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